You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to

travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the
percentage
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of transport modes which people in a European city used to go to work from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
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, it is evident that car commuters increased in the examined period.
However
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, the
percentage
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of
travelers
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by bike and on
foot
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fell dramatically. From 1960 to 1980, the people preferred use of buses and cars more than bikes and on
foot
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. The proportion of bus
travelers
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witnessed a remarkable increase from 18% to 27%.
Similarly
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, the figure for cars was 5% in 1960, which climbed significantly to 22% in 1980.
In contrast
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, the
percentage
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of people who used bikes and on
foot
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was quite high in 1960, with 25% and 34%, respectively. In the next 20 years, these numbers decreased sharply to 20% by bike and 17% on
foot
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. The year 2000 saw rapid growth in the
percentage
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of car
travelers
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, with 35%,
whereas
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the other three transport modes dropped gradually, with about 15% by bus, and under 10% by bike and on
foot
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, foot with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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