People think that countries should produce foods their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write your response not less than 250 words. You get 40 minutes to complete this task

Nowadays, some

people

consume imported

food

because they are living in those countries whose cannot able to produce their own

foods

. Several communities believe that countries must have to produce those

foods

which are usually eaten by their population

,

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and import

those kind

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that kind

those kinds

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of

foods

which

are not cultivate

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are not cultivated

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by them. In my opinion, I agree that nations should have massive

producing

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production

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network systems where they can make

foods

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food

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for local

people

.

To begin

with, the reason why I agree with

this

view is that the

country

can improve their economy by establishing

food

factory

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factories

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in different areas. By doing

this

,

country

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the country

a country

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can save those

moneys

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money

amounts of money

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which are previously sent to

international

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the international

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country

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countries

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for importing

foods

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food

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.

Additionally

, local

people

can

also

have benefited from

this

development because they can apply for a job to work in

this

factory. To illustrate

this

, Indian

people

like to eat

cheetos

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snack chips. So, if India

establish

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a factory which

make

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makes

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it

then

it may be possible that it cannot be imported from the USA.

Moreover

, it is easy for

government

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the government

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to

reproduced

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reproduce

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foods

with

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updating or removing some ingredients from the original ones.

This

will not take much time.

In contrast

, changing

ingredients

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the ingredients

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of imported

foods

is not feasible for

local

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the local

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country

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countries

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as it has

copy rights

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Furthermore

, the quality of imported

food

is sometimes not well as

people

want.

As a result

, folks can be suffering from health issues.

In contrast

, local industry

foods

are fresh and likely to be eaten by all

people

. In conclusion, some folks argue that their countries ought to make

foods

which they eat and import less

food

from international

country

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countries

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. In my view, I agree with

this

view because there are several benefits of producing

foods

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food

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in one's own

country

.