In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children thi message?
In some communities, young people are told that they are able to get whatever they want if they put in enough effort. I opine the bright sight of
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idea is growing diligent and positive kids, Linking Words
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putting energy into something impossible is the downside.
Teaching the young generation that they are capable of doing anything they want if they try hard, makes them more confident and keeps them away from disappointment. If they raise with Linking Words
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belief that their failure is the result of their insufficient effort and not being intelligent enough, they will start over without losing self-confidence and nothing can stop them until they gain their goals. Linking Words
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, they want to stop trying since they have a positive attitude and they know that failure is a bridge to success and is just temporary. Linking Words
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the results of recent research, 75% of the students who failed a test but received encouragement from their families for the next exams, have improved by 35% . Linking Words
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belief in the youth will be a game changer.
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idea might stay in vain if a person is physically or mentally incapable of doing something which leads to wasting their talent, time, and energy. To put it in illustration, a blind person perhaps will never be able to be a sharpshooter regardless of how much he tries. Linking Words
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as music, singing, or writing.
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opinion can help the young to be optimist and hard-working but it's essential to recognize our skills to avoid any waste of time and talent.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...