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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

#people #neighbors #cities
Nowadays, Inflation is at
the
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 peak in an excessive number of cities,
due to
 which
people
 are so busy, that they don't even have enough
time
 to devote to their
friends
 and nearby
people
. In
this
 looming essay, I will briefly discuss the origin of these issues and provide the best solutions to solve them. The prime factor responsible for
this
 situation is that because of inflation both members of the family work in a job, and office pressure have significantly increased in metro cities
due to
 which, it is very difficult for each individual to connect with their
friends
 or neighbours after the office.
Moreover
, traffic jams are
also
 a big concern, corporate working hours are mostly between 9 Am to 6 Pm and after 6 Pm in major metro cities like Bangalore and Delhi traffic is at
the
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 peak.
Thus
,
people
 spend around 1 to 2 hours in traffic and it is very difficult for them to devote
time
 to their
friends
 and family. In every ,society a rule should be made, that each month community will organise small events in which
people
 who belong to the community will participate in the organised activities, as a matter of
fact
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 they will connect with their near ones, and start making more
friends
.
Furthermore
, every individual should devote some
time
 to their personal life,
due to
 which they will talk to their
friends
 and invite neighbours to dinner on occasion.
Thus
,
this
 small initiative will definitely help
people
 to live a happy life where they will have
friends
 to talk, to share their problems and celebrate festivals. In a nutshell, it is extremely important for every individual to have good
friends
 in
this
 crowded world
,
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 because no one has
time
 to help anyone in a bad situation.
Thus
 each individual should give some
time
 to their personal life,
due to
 which they will make new
friends
 and have good relations with their neighbours.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of community
  • isolation
  • loneliness
  • support network
  • sense of security
  • trust
  • cooperation
  • social support
  • integration
  • community events
  • shared spaces
  • neighborly interactions
  • neighborhood watch programs
  • community engagement
  • technology
  • connect
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