Write a letter to your friend who you recently travelled with to a foreign country. Include • Why you enjoyed the trip • What you are doing now • An invitation to visit you now

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Dear Meet , Hope

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letter finds you in good health and spirit. I am writing

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letter to express my joy and invite you to my place. Our recent trip to Bali was full of fun,

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will never forget those after-drunk talks, our crazy dance moves in Bali clubs as well our talks during the night walks. And how we explored their culture and traditional food. I will never forget those days and

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; cherish all moments we had together.

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got a job in a multi-national company,

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package and benefits are really good. To celebrate my success I'm hosting a small party at my house on 1st June. I would love it if you can be part of

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celebration. Looking forward to

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you soon and

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more memories. Let me know if you have any questions. Please feel free to ping me a message. Yours sincerely, Stuti Sheth

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0Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

155 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Write a letter to your friend who you recently travelled with to a foreign country. Include • Why you enjoyed the trip • What you are doing now • An invitation to visit you now

Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter, give details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take

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