The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The first table illustrates the results of a research which contains 100000 individuals that were questioned if they travelled to another country and the reason for their journey between 1994 and 1998. The second table gives information about which mainland they travelled over the same time span.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the number of British people who visited other nations were risen gradually from 1994 to 1998. Most of the visitors aim to go abroad was a rest.
Additionally
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, the British favoured visiting Western Europe and North America more than other regions.
Moreover
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, citizens of Britain went abroad only for vacation purposes.
Also
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, more than 3000 inhabitants went for work purposes and to visit their friends and relatives.
Nevertheless
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, there was another reason to visit foreign counties which were around 900 individuals. Referring to both tables, a huge amount of British people went to Western Europe for a holiday, for business purposes and to visit their close people between 1994-1998.
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