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The plants below show the site of an airport now and how it will lock after redevelopment next year

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The given plans highlight the information about
site
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the site
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 of an airport at the moment and how it will reconstruct in the common year.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of
gates
 will be
expended
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 enormously.
However
, passengers will not take a walk along the
gates
 and
also
,
holiday makers
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holidaymakers
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is
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are
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 going to hire vehicles from
car
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the car
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 hire section. What's more, the departure and arrival
part
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port
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 will be doubled in the new plan. Looking at the details, the number of
gates
 will be increased from eight to eighteen.
Furthermore
, passengers will not have to take
walk
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a walk
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 along the
gates
instead
 they will be
used
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sky
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the sky
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 train in the new plan.
besides
, the empty region between the security and doors is about to set up shops.
moreover
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Moreover
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,
check in
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 is going to take away from the west to
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the center
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center
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centre
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 of
an
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the
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 airport and
bag
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the bag
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 drop will be gone
instead
.What's more, two
cafe
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cafes
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 will be designed in the northeast and southwest part of the airport.
in addition
, passengers are about to hire
car
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a car
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 from
southeast
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the southeast
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 part of it and
finally
, ATM will
beside
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be beside
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 the car hire section.
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