The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The diagram illustrates the average temperature from January to December and the number of
hours
of sunshine in
London
, New
York
and
Sydney
per year. The measurement is given by the hour.
Overall
, New
York
was in the first rank for the cities with the highest annual
hours
of sunshine.
While
Lonon
in
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the third rank.
In addition
,
London
and
Sydney
have the brightest hour in July,
whereas
, New
York
on January to March. To start with,
London
and
Sydney
trends were increasing gradually from April to July and started decreasing from August to December. These two cities have the same highest peak in July, between 20 and 25, respectively.
Moreover
, New
York
's temperature was stable, with 25
hours
of sunshine from January to March and hit its lowest in July with only slightly above 15
hours
. Even though,
London
and
Sydney
have 5 and 10
hours
respectively for the lowest sun
hours
.
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