The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive.
The pie chart illustrates the reasons for land being less
cultivative
for agricultural purposes . Meanwhile, the table shows how these affected the three different regions in the year 1990.
Correct your spelling
cultivated
cultivation
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that,the over-grazing is the main reason for soil degradation. At the same time, the data makes it clear that Europe is the most pompous of it.
Firstly
, over-grazing account
for 35% in 1990 followed by deforestation with no less than 30%.Wrong verb form
accounted
However
, it is normal to cut down trees. Although
, it is mandatory to plant another instead
that is
absent in this
data. The next reason is over-cultivation which is only 2% less than deforestation and the others are about 7%.
Secondly
, Europe is the region with the highest percentage 23 and Oceania with 13%.Moreover
, North America is the one with the least ratio. However
, Europe has an overall
majority .Oceania accounts for 0% of over-cultivation.Submitted by ameeshaaa19 on
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