You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.

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Dear Mr. Henry, I am writing to you to inform you about some wrong data I found in the

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'Adventures in Kumarakom'. My name is Gloria and I am a resident in the

city

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of Kumarakom for the

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20 years. First of all, let me congratulate you on

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outstanding

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; it was indeed a pleasure reading

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masterpiece.

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, being an inhabitant of the

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, I would like to notify you that the History part in Chapter 2 is not accurate. The

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describes the

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as originating during the reign of British rulers, but there is evidence that it existed well before

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period. In fact,

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incredible

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was built during the reign of renowned Emperor Kabir Shah in 1856. The remnants of the old

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were found during the time of the British and they renovated

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area into a form which we currently see. It would be great if you could add

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information to the

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so that the reader would have a complete reading experience. Conspicuously, the

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is an excellent presentation of Kumarakom's rich heritage and beauty with an expressive articulation which keeps anyone who likes reading to enjoy

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book

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to the core. Would you kindly consider my recommendations? Thanks for your understanding! I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Gloria Mathew

gloriasherinSat Jun 01 2024

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coherence cohesion

The letter is well-organized, but you could enhance readability by using bullet points or sections for different points.

task achievement

Try to use more varied vocabulary to demonstrate your language proficiency in the task.

task achievement

The letter has a clear and polite tone, which is very suitable for a formal letter to an author.

coherence cohesion

You have structured your letter well, making it easy to follow your points and reasoning.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

225 words

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