Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals, etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, public celebration is one of the most common traditions in every country. Some people believe that it spends so much money on the government. In fact, I agree with those who say that the money should use in other sectors.
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essay will explain more and give some relevant examples. On the one hand, it is true that entertainment is an important factor in our social life. But, if it is too large, the authorities must take their budget.
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, during the new year's party of 2022, Indonesia spent almost ten billion to create some attractions ,especially in Monas (National Monument).
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that, they must manage all of the agenda, fireworks, security etcetera. At the time the President of Indonesia
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gave a speech in front of the icon of the country's capital and the Indonesians could see it by watching television or coming to that place.
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, in my point of view, the money can be given to other sectors
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as the people who stay below bridges or maybe to the children who do not have an education. It is more useful than other programs.
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, the tradition is very dangerous and can make a negative impact on the viewers. As an illustration of
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condition, In South Korea, a couple of months ago the Halloween party, in a small way, thousands of people came and celebrated the event. Unfortunately, hundreds of Korean populations died because they could not breathe and fall down. In conclusion, celebrations of some traditional events are not an urgent program but I believe
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its drawbacks, the funds can be used for other purposes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fostering
  • national pride
  • unity
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of belonging
  • boost the local economy
  • hospitality and retail sectors
  • showcase
  • global audience
  • foreign relations
  • multifaceted
  • allocating
  • quality of life
  • social inclusion
  • cohesive and inclusive society
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