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Many people believe that learning a language at childhood is much easier that at adulthood. Do yo agree or disagree?

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nowadays, learning another
language
 is an important aspect of life.
therefore
, I strongly believe additional
language
 should be taught during
childhood
 period.
firstly
, Will discuss the importance of the different
languages
 in our day-to-day life.
Language
 plays a very good role in our current upgraded generation. It's very necessary to know at least a few other
languages
 to enhance our future. nowadays, it's become easier to get jobs if we know any other
languages
.
For example
: I want to apply for a
job
 and the requirements for that particular
job
 are can able to speak Spanish and French and English,
on the other hand
, I can speak all 3
languages
 as per the
job
 needs so it's highly possible I will get the
job
.
secondly
,
According to
 ,me I believe that learning a
language
 in
childhood
 is much easier
instead
 in adulthood. As we all know children are like clay how we try to mould them they will easily get moulded. every good thing should be taught to them during the period of their
childhood
. As everyone believes that during
childhood
 mind keep on developing their abilities to accept all kind of knowledge. Adults can face difficulties to learn other
languages
 because of their busy schedules. In conclusion, I would say it's important to learn different
languages
 during the
childhood
 period because it's become more easy to adopt anything in the
childhood
 phase so every parent should encourage their children to learn a variety of
languages
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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