The chart below shows the persentage of male and female teachers and six different types

The chart below shows the persentage of male and female teachers and six different types
The diagram shows the proportion of
men
and women as
teachers
in various types of educational settings in the United Kingdom by 2010.
Overall
, it was apparent that female personnel had a bigger percentage in early education schools
while
higher institutes
such
as universities were taught by more
men
. The female
teachers
had just above 90% when it comes to nursery/pre-school and primary school.
In contrast
, only about 30% of women teach at university. When the secondary school had just above 50% of the female workforce, colleges could be said to have better gender equality in terms of the portion of
teachers
.
Furthermore
, the private training institute had almost half of the female
teachers
. On the other side, only a few
men
taught in earlier education institutes. The
men
were almost slightly past the portion of women taught in secondary school and had around 55% proportion in private training institutes. Male
teachers
were dominant in the university.
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