In future people may have to live on other planets. Some think that it is therefore important to spend money on researching other planets such as mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is predicted that
at the end
of
this
,century
humans
have to figure out to live outside of
this
planet
due to
rising numbers in pollution and population.
Therefore
, some people believe that it is necessary to invest money in researching another planet to survive for
humans
. I agreed with
this
statement but with some considerations of that.
To begin
with, as industrialisation is increasing day by day to fulfil the demand of the increasing population, it affecting the
environment
negatively by polluting it with the
waste
of industries in the air, water and land.
For example
, a country like Australia drops 100 of tons
waste
into the ocean which includes
waste
from industries, households,
waste
disposal and
waste
of medical disposals every year which significantly effecting the marine life of organisms and pollutes water. On the other side of it, the government should spend more money on reusable and clean energy resources
such
as solar panels, and biodegradable disposals, which create more, efficient and clean energy to make the
environment
safe and better to live for homo-sapience.
For example
, more than 50% of air pollution occurs
due to
the use of transportation vehicles which generate dangerous gases into the
environment
and make it hard for individuals to breathe oxygen from the air.
To conclude
, as
humans
are failed to control on increasing population of the world, it is important to discover another planet to live on
humans
,
Therefore
, the research should continue to work on it,
Similarly
, it is not be ignored to invest in the
environment
to protect from crazy demands of developing generations and higher authority should make some strict rules and regulation to abusing the
environment
.
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