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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is argued that some of the
countries
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 have younger populations on average
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 others have older populations, respectively.
This
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 essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of having more young adults than older
people
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 in
countries
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. First of all, the more young
people
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 mean the more workforce for the governments. Human power is very crucial for economic development.
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, if there are a lot of workers that produce, invent and bring money to the country,
this
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 nation would be more likely to have better financial conditions.
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, having a higher
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 of younger citizens might be a sign of a good
rate
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 of birth which is essential to a nation's sustainability
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 is a big concern for most European
countries
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 as they have a very low
rate
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 of birth. To summarize, having a younger population contributes to the government's economy and pursues the nation's sustainability. On the other side, if there are not adequate employment opportunities for these young
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, the government can face unemployment and immigration problems. A good illustration of
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 Turkey, which has a big portion of dynamic generation but has not enough job opportunities for all of them.
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 a lot of Turkish
people
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 keep moving
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 European
countries
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 to earn their living.
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, to own fewer old
people
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 might be a sign of a short
lifetime
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, which means the health sector is not developed enough to give the citizens the
lifetime
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 they deserve in the contemporary world. In brief, there are disadvantages
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 as unemployment and immigration,
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 to the low expectation of a
lifetime
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. In conclusion, I think the advantages
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 as having a large population of workforce and a good birth
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, do not overweight the disadvantages of the situation which mainly the unemployment, immigration problems and lower expectation for a
lifetime
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.
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