Pie charts show main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007
The pie charts illustrate the significant reasons for emigration and immigration to the United Kingdom in 2007.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that getting a job or looking for it are two main factors for both migration types, while
factors such
as formal study or accompany are less common.
With regards to the similarities, getting a job is known to be the most considerable reason for changing a county (30% of immigration and 29% of emigration respectively). Also
, looking for a place to work is considered to be a crucial factor for people.
There are also
some differences between these charts. Firstly
, foreign students often choose the
UK universities (26%), Correct article usage
apply
however
, natives are not used to study
abroad (4%). Change the verb form
studying
Secondly
, to compare with the low percentage of emigration, immigration purposes had no reason in 26% of all cases.Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on
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