In many parts of world,children's lives were very different from today.What do you think were the advantage and disadvantages of life for children in the past?
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lived in the past had its advantage and disadvantage.I think there were a lot of good points at the time.
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all science and medicine. because we know that there were many state wars in the past, and they suffered, and they spent their lives doing Linking Words
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research so that they would not suffer.And it can be added that in the past, Linking Words
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, they moved to another place when they were struck, or because there was not enough food. They always played natural games, a simple Use synonyms
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they could drown these aspects are different from the good conditions now they don't have special school busses textbooks these aspects are their biggest disadvantages.
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, they ate natural juice or natural things, so they became healthy.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite