2 In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV drama?

In
this
world
day
by
day
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several
people
are addicted to
crime
novels
and TV misconduct dramas. There are many reasons for
this
situation in the society. There for what are the reasons, and my opinion I am going to explain
further
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folk
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folks
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like to watch thrilling episodes. Because
,
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that
are
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an activity gives to
audience
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the audience
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long- lasting
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long-lasting
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entertainment. Especially, they search
crime
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for crime
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stories more entertaining rather than other programs. For an instant, some Bollywood movies are full of violent
action
. But like
this
action
performing well industries.
As well as
they know very well
this
serious
harmful
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harm
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to
the
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society.
However
they try to give
people
just enjoy watching murder
action
, using
gungs
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guns
gangs
gongs
..etc.
As a result
,
people
not only enjoy they are trying to get experience.
Therefore
, nowadays, everywhere were increased
crime
cases.
On the other hand
, many readers are addicted to
the
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crime
novels
.
Therefore
main reason is some writers try to give happiness to readers. Especially the horror events
that
is
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are
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included in the whole
story
and often the
story
ends with a murder.
Thus
, not only that, all over the
story
very clearly explain how to do
crime
action
.
as
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As
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a result at
this
moment so many younger
people
like to read
crime
novels
and always they try to get experiences as a
story
.
For Instance
: so many younger
people
read Sherlock’s novel.
TO
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conclude, in my point of view
crime
dramas and
novels
break society’s rules and regulations. Nowadays in
this
world,
day
by
day
grow
crime
situation
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situations
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. It would be better give to the message to the youth crowds;
crime
has to play very badly
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