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2 In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV drama?

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day
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 several
people
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 are addicted to
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novels
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 and TV misconduct dramas. There are many reasons for
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 situation in the society. There for what are the reasons, and my opinion I am going to explain
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 like to watch thrilling episodes. Because
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 that
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 an activity gives to
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long- lasting
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 entertainment. Especially, they search
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crime
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 stories more entertaining rather than other programs. For an instant, some Bollywood movies are full of violent
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 performing well industries.
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 to
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society.
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 just enjoy watching murder
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guns
gangs
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,
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 not only enjoy they are trying to get experience.
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, nowadays, everywhere were increased
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 cases.
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, many readers are addicted to
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crime
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novels
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 included in the whole
story
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 and often the
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 ends with a murder.
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, not only that, all over the
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 very clearly explain how to do
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action
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.
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as
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 a result at
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 moment so many younger
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 like to read
crime
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novels
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 and always they try to get experiences as a
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.
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 read Sherlock’s novel.
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 conclude, in my point of view
crime
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 dramas and
novels
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 break society’s rules and regulations. Nowadays in
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 world,
day
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 by
day
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 grow
crime
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situation
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. It would be better give to the message to the youth crowds;
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 has to play very badly
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