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the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.
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The BAR graph illustrates the details of the total
number
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of
people
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growing in a few parts of the
world
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including their
further
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forecasting.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
people
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in urban areas will be increased in the entire
world
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by 2030 as compared to 1950. Not only
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, actual urban growth was started throughout the
world
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in 1950 because the
number
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of folks living in the urban area has been improved in 2000 as well.
Firstly
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, In 1950 there were 30% of
people
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living in the urban area,
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, the
number
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of
people
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living in Africa and Asia were low respectively around 10% but at the same time the maximum growth was found in Latin America with above 40%.,
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in 2000, the urban population had continued to grow at below 50% in the whole
world
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and almost the same in Africa and Asia at around 40%,
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to
this
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sharp rise in Latin America to 70%.
On the other hand
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, by 2030 there will slight hick of approximately 10% in the Whole
world
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, Africa and Latin America from around 49% to 60, 39% to 50% and 70% to 80% respectively,
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, a sharp rise is shown in Asia from around 39% to 55%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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