Currently, many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives.What are the reasons and how to solve it?
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people
are getting more and more engaged in their office work, and Use synonyms
hence
they are unable to focus on other aspects of life. Nowadays, it is easily identified that most of the localists are running a rat race for money. There are multiple reasons for Linking Words
this
development and I will discuss the reasons in Linking Words
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along with
possible solutions.
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Firstly
, Metropolitan culture has increased progress in cosmopolitan type lifestyle, Linking Words
,
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consequently
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,consequently
people
have started living in a nuclear family. Use synonyms
This
development has created more responsibilities for individuals to run their families. Not only Linking Words
this
, inflation has increased in the Linking Words
last
decade and household expenses are not able to manage after working limited hours, Linking Words
In contrast
, it inspires working men and women to spend more time on their professional carrier. Linking Words
For example
, Japanese Linking Words
people
are working at least 10-12 hours in the offices to bit local expenses.
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Secondly
, the business Linking Words
people
have to focus double on their businesses Use synonyms
due to
a lot of competition between pear companies to gain market shares. Linking Words
In addition
, someone can easily lose their customer Linking Words
due to
greedy advertisements by another group, Linking Words
hence
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this
type of work-life asks more focus on personal achievements rather than focusing on other stuff of personal life. Linking Words
For instance
, big giant Nestle is taking market share of noddles by bombarding a pretty good advertisement.
In conclusion, it is a necessity for all countries to manage working pressure Linking Words
along with
individual personal commitments. Linking Words
This
can be resolved only by the government authorities by keeping strict rules for organization working hours and declaring additional national holidays so the local individuals can spend precious time with their loved ones Linking Words
as well as
their own.Linking Words
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