The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.

The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the water levels in 6 different areas in Australia from October 2009 and the same period in 2010. In general, almost cities in 2010 had higher levels than those in 2009, except for Darwin.
In addition
, Sydney was a city having the highest percentage of water lever in 2009, and it was true for Canberra in 2010. As can be seen clearly from the bar chart, most cities rose a number percentage from 2009 to 2010, except Darwin. There were three cities in 2010 that had a dramatic increase Melbourne, Perth, and Canberra with around 20 -30 per
cent
higher than in 2009.
Moreover
, Brisbane shared the same proportion at nearly 60 per
cent
in
this
period of both two years. Sydney was the city which had the highest figure in 2009 at 80 per
cent
;
however
, Canberra was significant growth in 2010 and perfectly surpassed Sydney with 100 per
cent
.
Furthermore
, Melbourne was the lowest city among those figures in both 2 years with just 20 per
cent
.
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