The table and pie chart gives information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

The given

table

and

pie

chart

provide information about the

people

in Australia from different countries. The

pie

chart

depicts the proportion of nations from China,

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Netherland

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Netherlands

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and New Zealand and others and the

table

illustrates

the

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their living areas in

cities

and

countryside

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the countryside

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.

Overal

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Overall

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, it is clear from the

pie

chart

and the

table

that among several nationalities, the

poportion

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proportion

of Australians

are

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is

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highest and most of the

people

are living in

cities

rather than

countryside

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the countryside

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. The

pie

chart

shows that

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there are 73%

people

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of people

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are Australian and

people

from New Zealand, China and

Netherland

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Netherlands

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are only 3%, 2% and 1% respectively which is significantly lower than the proportion of Australian

people

.

Moreover

, there are other nationalities

also

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who also

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reside in Australia which is again

comparativelty

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comparatively

lower than the Australian

people

and

that is

14%. From the

table

, it is obvious that

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approximately 99% of Chinese

people

prefer to live in

cities

whereas

only 1% lives in

countryside

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the countryside

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.

In addition

, the proportion of New Zealanders and British

people

are

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90% and 89% respectively who belong to

cities

Whereas

comparatively 10% and 11% are living in

countryside

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the countryside

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. In regard to Dutch

people

, only 17% are living in

countryside

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the countryside

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and 83% are living in

cities

. The same parameter is demonstrated

the

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case of Australia because 80% are living in

cities

and 20%

are

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belong to

countryside

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the countryside

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.