The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph illustrates the statistics for the prices of bananas in four nations between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
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, what stands out from the data is that the
price
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of the banana fluctuated throughout the given period.
While
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Japan accounts for the highest
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, the USA is the lowest. In 1994, The
price
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of banana in Japan was about $2 per kilogram, before soaring to its highest cost of just under $3 per kilogram in 1995. The
price
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fluctuated and dropped for approximately $1 in 2001, prior to its ascent and the
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stayed at $2.50 in 2004.
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, the cost in The USA shifted a little bit but stayed relatively low and plateaued from 1999 to 2004. In more detail, the rate in Germany hovered and stayed at just under $1.50 for the entire given period,
whereas
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France saw a significant drop in 2003 by $1 per kilogram, before taking a rapid increase
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around $1.50 by 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Fluctuate
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stable/Stability
  • Significant
  • Gradual
  • Sharp
  • Slight
  • Peak
  • Plummet
  • Spike
  • Level off
  • Dip
  • Plateau
  • Cost
  • Price
  • Currency
  • Decade
  • Year-on-year
  • Economic factors
  • Consumer demand
  • Inflation
  • Market forces
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