The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish.

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process

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chart gives

the

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detailed idea of making smoked

fish

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. As we can clearly

seen

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that

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the

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process

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of making smoked

fish

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is almost 12

steps

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12-step

procedure which starts at catching

fish

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and ends with selling in

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fish

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a fish

the fish

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shop.

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with, catching the

fish

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and

transport

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transporting

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it to the port via boat.

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Then

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The

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process

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of freezing the

fish

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occurs. Afterwards

fish

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have to be

thaw

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thawed

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in fresh water.

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cutting of

fish

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happens in which we cut the

fish

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and

distiled

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distilled

in sal water until

water

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the water

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turn

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turns

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into

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apply

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yellow colour. Following that,

fish

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goes into

smoke

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the smoke

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pot and

smoking

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the smoking

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of

fish

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would be done.

This

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step is the most important for

whole

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the whole

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procedure.

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that, smoked

fish

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will be packed in

box

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a box

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and

have to

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apply

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stored

them

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apply

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in freezer and put the boxes in cold storage. The

last

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step of the

process

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is

transport

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to transport

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it and distribute it to the

fish

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shop for selling

purpose

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purposes

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.

To conclude

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, making smoked

fish

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is

lengthy

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a lengthy

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process

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from

fish

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catching to

sell

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selling

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. But the most important part of the whole making

process

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is smoking

fish

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.