The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish.
The given
process
chart gives the
detailed idea of making smoked Correct article usage
a
fish
.
As we can clearly seen
Change the verb form
see
that
Correct determiner usage
the
process
of making smoked fish
is almost 12 steps
procedure which starts at catching Correct your spelling
12-step
fish
and ends with selling in fish
shop. Add an article
a fish
the fish
To begin
with, catching the fish
and transport
it to the port via boat. Wrong verb form
transporting
Then
Correct your spelling
The
process
of freezing the fish
occurs. Afterwards fish
have to be thaw
in fresh water. Wrong verb form
thawed
Next,
cutting of fish
happens in which we cut the fish
and distiled
in sal water until Correct your spelling
distilled
water
Correct article usage
the water
turn
Change the verb form
turns
into
yellow colour. Following that, Change preposition
apply
fish
goes into smoke
pot and Add an article
the smoke
a smoke
smoking
of Correct article usage
the smoking
fish
would be done. This
step is the most important for whole
procedure. Add an article
the whole
And after
that, smoked Correct word choice
After
fish
will be packed in box
and Add an article
a box
the box
have to
stored Verb problem
apply
them
in freezer and put the boxes in cold storage. The Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
step of the process
is transport
it and distribute it to the Fix the infinitive
to transport
fish
shop for selling purpose
.
Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
To conclude
, making smoked fish
is lengthy
Add an article
a lengthy
process
from fish
catching to sell
. But the most important part of the whole making Wrong verb form
selling
process
is smoking fish
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