the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summerise the information by slecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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two floor

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plans of a

library

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at present and how it was 20 years ago.

Overall

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, it can be seen that the

library

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has upgraded its online resources and added more facilities,

such

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as a café, an events

room

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, and a lecture

room

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To begin

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with, 20 years ago, the

library

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had some chairs and tables for the people at the centre of the

library

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, which are now removed. On the right-hand side of the entrance, there was an enquiry

room

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and a space for adult non-fiction

books

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. The enquiry desk

room

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has now turned into a café. There are self-service machines and adult fiction

books

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along with

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the information desk. Meanwhile, the children’s

books

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room

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has now been turned into a lecture

room

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, which is in the top right section of the plan. After 20 years, the reading

room

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, which contained newspapers and magazines, was converted to a computer

room

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on the left side of the entry.

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adult

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fiction book space is where all reference

books

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are kept now.

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, the computer games

room

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has now been developed as a bigger

room

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for children’s fiction

books

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, which contains two sofas for story-telling events.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

199 words

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the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summerise the information by slecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, wave and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens eat a healthy diet. Others believe that individuals must take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that finding a job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly pepole.