The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs compare the percentage of a country of families that own three kinds of electrical appliances and those families spent the amount of time per week doing
housework
from 1920 to 2019. Use synonyms
Overall
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it is clear that
three types of electrical appliances constantly increase, Linking Words
such
as the washing Linking Words
machine
, the Use synonyms
refrigerator
, and the Use synonyms
vacuum
cleaner. Use synonyms
By contrast
, people spent less time on Linking Words
housework
over 99 periods in 2019.
In 1920, Use synonyms
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while
there was the lowest percentage of ownership of electrical appliances, with the washing Correct word choice
apply
machine
, the Use synonyms
refrigerator
, and the Use synonyms
vacuum
cleaner, standing at 40%, 30%, and 0% respectively. The figure for spending time on Use synonyms
housework
stood at 50%. From 1920 to 1960, the usage of the washing Use synonyms
machine
, the Use synonyms
refrigerator
, and the Use synonyms
vacuum
cleaner dramatically rose, the rate from 40% to 70%, 30% to 70%, and 0% to 90%, Use synonyms
whereas
the spending on Linking Words
housework
decreased by 30 hours per week.
After 1980, there was a slight fluctuation decline in spending on Use synonyms
housework
, around 20 to 10%. During Use synonyms
this
period, the figures for the washing Linking Words
machine
and the Use synonyms
refrigerator
remained stable, at 100%. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the rate of Linking Words
vacuum
slightly increased from over 60% to over 70%.Use synonyms
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