The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs compare the percentage of a country of families that own three kinds of electrical appliances and those families spent the amount of time per week doing
housework
from 1920 to 2019. Overall
, it is clear that
three types of electrical appliances constantly increase, such
as the washing machine
, the refrigerator
, and the vacuum
cleaner. By contrast
, people spent less time on housework
over 99 periods in 2019.
In 1920, while
there was the lowest percentage of ownership of electrical appliances, with the washing Correct word choice
apply
machine
, the refrigerator
, and the vacuum
cleaner, standing at 40%, 30%, and 0% respectively. The figure for spending time on housework
stood at 50%. From 1920 to 1960, the usage of the washing machine
, the refrigerator
, and the vacuum
cleaner dramatically rose, the rate from 40% to 70%, 30% to 70%, and 0% to 90%, whereas
the spending on housework
decreased by 30 hours per week.
After 1980, there was a slight fluctuation decline in spending on housework
, around 20 to 10%. During this
period, the figures for the washing machine
and the refrigerator
remained stable, at 100%. By contrast
, the rate of vacuum
slightly increased from over 60% to over 70%.Submitted by kristy.liu910 on
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