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The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts how many nitrogen oxide emissions are produced by four distinct tools of transportation. The units are denoted as grams per kilometre. From a holistic perspective, it is obvious that buses contribute to the highest amounts of nitrogen oxide as opposed to diesel cars, which is the smallest emission.
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, both fueled and diesel cars experienced a steady increase in the amounts of gas emissions in their whole range of speed.
However
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, buses and lorries had fluctuations. As per starting points, the nitrogen oxide emission is recorded at 40 grams per kilometre and 33 grams per kilometre for buses and lorries respectively, and
thereafter
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 both of these vehicles saw a decrease in their amounts of release.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • nitrogen oxide emissions
  • vehicles
  • grams per kilometer
  • car
  • motorcycle
  • bus
  • truck
  • highest amount
  • lowest amount
  • produces
  • emits
  • same amount
  • overall
  • emissions
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