It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, people have several opinions about reforming or erecting a new one.

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believes that erecting new structures is easier than reforming.To some extent, I agree with

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opinion because of some reasons,but still believe that there are other aspects to consider. Arguably, reforming structures can be made some burdens on our budget.

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for their project.As in the past majority wanted to live like the King and it became popular. In fact, most European families create their style in their houses there are want to show their budget via Villas.Admittedly

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argument influenced a significant increase in resource costs. Since the more we want the more the traders sell their

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product.

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, reforming old buildings is harder than erecting new ones as when we want to reform we need not only

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the original project which was planned by the oldest architectures.

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, to reconsider old castles first off we should get

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if we want to reconstruct castles or old villas we need a spot master of

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modern buildings

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type of work can be easier than reforming in a knowledge power.Since present days new buildings so similar and

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cheaper than past. As long as we want to erect new houses we should not spot

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since nowadays every builder can make that type of building via their several tools.

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, modern erections do not need different types of elements

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as colours or metal arguments. In a nutshell, I have mixed opinions about the discussed topic

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certain cases that could be true for different circumstances.Holding a firm opinion about it means difficult and balance should be in

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