It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, people have several opinions about reforming or erecting a new one.

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believes that erecting new structures is easier than reforming.To some extent, I agree with

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opinion because of some reasons,but still believe that there are other aspects to consider. Arguably, reforming structures can be made some burdens on our budget.

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in the

past

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past,

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more educators utilized hard

as well as

high-cost

materials

for their project.As in the past majority wanted to live like the King and it became popular. In fact, most European families create their style in their houses there are want to show their budget via Villas.Admittedly

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argument influenced a significant increase in resource costs. Since the more we want the more the traders sell their

materials

more than the simple cost of

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product.

Secondly

, reforming old buildings is harder than erecting new ones as when we want to reform we need not only

materials

but

also

the original project which was planned by the oldest architectures.

In addition

, to reconsider old castles first off we should get

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from

government

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the government

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as well as

if we want to reconstruct castles or old villas we need a spot master of

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. Turning to

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modern buildings

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type of work can be easier than reforming in a knowledge power.Since present days new buildings so similar and

then

the

materials

cheaper than past. As long as we want to erect new houses we should not spot

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of

this

since nowadays every builder can make that type of building via their several tools.

Furthermore

, modern erections do not need different types of elements

such

as colours or metal arguments. In a nutshell, I have mixed opinions about the discussed topic

as well as

certain cases that could be true for different circumstances.Holding a firm opinion about it means difficult and balance should be in

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essay.