The pie charts below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001.

The pie charts below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001.
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The pie charts illustrate the changes in the distribution of expenditure from 1981 to 2001.
Overall
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, it is evident that most of the money went to teachers’s salaries during the
period
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given and the rest of the categories experienced changes over the
years
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. Over the
years
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, the proportion of teachers’ salaries grew, first reaching a peak of 50% in 1991, after which it dropped slightly down by 5% in the ten following
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.
In contrast
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, the money used for other workers’ pay experienced a downward trend starting from one-fourth of the whole spending and resulting in only 15
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, respectively.
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to teachers’ wages, the category of resources
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as books experienced a high point of 20% in 1991,
however
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, it dropped significantly by half towards 2001, which is even lower than it used to be at the beginning of the
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. In terms of the rest of the categories, furniture and equipment
as well as
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insurance grew over the
years
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.
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, the first one experienced a low point of only five
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in the middle of the
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, after which it substantially grew to over twenty
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. Insurance had the smallest proportion of money of under ten
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during the
period
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, years, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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