The pie charts below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001.
The pie charts illustrate the changes in the distribution of expenditure from 1981 to 2001.
Overall
, it is evident that most of the money went to teachers’s salaries during the Linking Words
period
given and the rest of the categories experienced changes over the Use synonyms
years
.
Over the Use synonyms
years
, the proportion of teachers’ salaries grew, first reaching a peak of 50% in 1991, after which it dropped slightly down by 5% in the ten following Use synonyms
years
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In contrast
, the money used for other workers’ pay experienced a downward trend starting from one-fourth of the whole spending and resulting in only 15 Linking Words
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percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
Similarly
to teachers’ wages, the category of resources Linking Words
such
as books experienced a high point of 20% in 1991, Linking Words
however
, it dropped significantly by half towards 2001, which is even lower than it used to be at the beginning of the Linking Words
period
.
In terms of the rest of the categories, furniture and equipment Use synonyms
as well as
insurance grew over the Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
However
, the first one experienced a low point of only five Linking Words
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percent
in the middle of the Change the spelling
per cent
period
, after which it substantially grew to over twenty Use synonyms
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percent
. Insurance had the smallest proportion of money of under ten Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
during the Change the spelling
per cent
period
.Use synonyms
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