You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend. In this letter: •Asking him or her to bring some things from home which you are need • Saying why you need them • Making arrangement to meet

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Dear Phoenix, How are you? It seems years since we

last

saw each other in Vietnam. I am incredibly happy when you have decided to come to Vancouver to visit me, especially considering that you have never been to

this

city before. I can't wait to show you around and I believe that you will fall in love with Vancouver's charm and vibrant atmosphere. I actually have a favour to ask you and I hope that you don't mind. I need something from Vietnam and I'd be grateful if you could bring them along in your suitcase.

Firstly

, could you help me to bring an electronic dictionary to Canada? I really need it for my upcoming language test. A similar model in Canada is very expensive. The second thing is some packs of Vietnamese instant noodles. I have left Vietnam for more than 5 years so I really miss its flavour. I hope that these things do not occupy too much space

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your suitcase. I am so excited to see you next Monday morning. I will be inside Terminal 1 and waiting for you with a "Welcome Phoenix to Canada" board. Lots of love, Lana

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8.50

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