You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates a few sites for building a new leisure
centre
in either a forest, near a residential area or around a factory.
Firstly
,
location
A largely consists of many facilities that release gas into the atmosphere and most likely result in noise pollution as well.
Although
there is a river stream flowing in
this
location
, it doesn't serve any
space
to construct the
centre
away from the factory.
Secondly
,
location
B is a residential
space
with three buildings of apartments. It is surrounded by lots of greenery and free
space
to easily make room for the
centre
so that the residents can use it.
Also
,
this
way it can be nearer to the public than having to travel far distances to reach the spot.
Thirdly
,
in contrast
,
location
C is filled with trees and does not have any water streams around it.
Further
, cutting down trees to free
space
for construction is not ideal for environmental reasons.
Overall
,
location
B is the most fitting for a leisure
centre
for the community to use and enjoy in comparison to the other areas.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, location, space with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • situated
  • countryside
  • town centre
  • highly accessible
  • residents
  • ample space
  • crowded
  • noisy
  • industrial area
  • balance
  • accessibility
  • pollution
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