The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates a few sites for building a new leisure
centre
in either a forest, near a residential area or around a factory.
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Firstly
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location
A largely consists of many facilities that release gas into the atmosphere and most likely result in noise pollution as well. Use synonyms
Although
there is a river stream flowing in Linking Words
this
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location
, it doesn't serve any Use synonyms
space
to construct the Use synonyms
centre
away from the factory.
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Secondly
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location
B is a residential Use synonyms
space
with three buildings of apartments. It is surrounded by lots of greenery and free Use synonyms
space
to easily make room for the Use synonyms
centre
so that the residents can use it. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
this
way it can be nearer to the public than having to travel far distances to reach the spot.
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Thirdly
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in contrast
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location
C is filled with trees and does not have any water streams around it. Use synonyms
Further
, cutting down trees to free Linking Words
space
for construction is not ideal for environmental reasons.
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Overall
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location
B is the most fitting for a leisure Use synonyms
centre
for the community to use and enjoy in comparison to the other areas.Use synonyms
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