You have recently visited a building which is of historical importance and came to know that it's in bad condition. Write a letter to local newspaper office. Which building it is? What are the problems? What do you expect them to do?
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my concern for one of the historical monuments named the Taj Mahal which is situated in Agra, India.
Last
month, I and my friends visited the Taj Mahal to do some research as well as
to understand the history of this
building which was quite disappointing.
Firstly
, the doors and windows are broken by the public or weather. In addition
, there were no garbage bins to throw waste, therefore
, a number of people were throwing their waste on the floor. Moreover
, the inner walls are covered with graffiti which not only causes irritation but also
concern about this
building.
I would like you to publish this
letter on the front page of your newspaper. This
could be one of the best ways to grab some attention of the Ministry of History toward the monument which can be helpful to mitigate this
issue. Secondly
, the public should be aware of this
issue. Furthermore
, I have some photographs that I want you to post in your newspaper.
Please feel free to contact me on my given number as well as
e-mail. Thanks in advance for considering this
issue.
Yours faithfully,
Gurpinder KaurSubmitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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task response
Address the specific questions asked in the prompt including the current condition of the building and what you expect the local newspaper to do.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate transition words and linking devices to ensure a smooth flow of ideas and information.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and accurately.
grammatical range
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use of tense forms for clarity and accuracy.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite