Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Animal testing for scientific reasons is still very common today. For some
people
, the harm to animals
does not justify the experimentation
. Others see it as necessary. I believe that this
is a very difficult situation but that there are some alternatives that can be used in non-essential industries
It is expected for new medications to be tested on animals
, as experimentation
is essential to know if the drug is safe before it is used on humans or not. consequently
, in this
case, experimentation
is justified as without this
many medicines would not exist today. However
, others argue that even in this
case it is not justified and that people
are very different to animals
so the tests are not useful.
Another type of testing is for cosmetic products
. Because lots of beauty products
are still tested on animals
unnecessarily there is no need for animals
to suffer like this
. Furthermore
, there are lots of companies that don’t experiment on animals
and still make similar products
. Also
, there are some alternatives to testing products
on animals
. Some scientists develop new ways for example
using cells. Many people
argue that these ways are good but that there is no animal cruelty.
in conclusion, animal testing for medicinal purposes could be accepted if there is no alternative. The medicine may save lots of people
from dying. Animal testing for beauty products
is not acceptable and we should have new ways of experimentation
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The essay provides a response to the task and addresses both parts of the question: whether animal testing can be justified and if there are any alternatives. However, it could benefit from more detailed support and specific examples to enhance its arguments.
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