The table and chart below gives information on the police budget for 20017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came fromand the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table reveals the amount of income from three different sources and the pie charts illustrate the

proportion

of expenditures in three categories. These data represent a specific city

of

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Britain from 2017 to 2018. In general, it can be seen that National Government accounted for

majority

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of the revenue,

while

salaries accounted for the largest

proportion

of expenditure. In detail, all the sources of income had experienced a marked increase.

National

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Government provided most of the revenue,

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from 175.5m in 2017 to 177.8m in 2018.

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, local taxes had increased from 91.2m to 102.3m in the same period. The

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proportion

of income, other sources like grants,

also

increased gradually from 38m to 38,5m in the following period.

Furthermore

, with regard to expenditures, salaries, representing a significant

proportion

of expenditure

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fell from three-quarters to below seven in ten of the totals in 2018. At 8%, technology was the smallest number of the expenditure,

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experienced

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increased

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to 14% in 2018.

On the other hand

, the total spending

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buildings and transport remained constant at 17% the same year.