The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. 

Summerise the information  by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
The line graph compares the number of tourists travelling to a certain Caribbean
island
and their preference of stay in the
years
between 2010 and 2017 and the visitors can be accommodated either on the
island
or on a cruise ship.
Overall
, the number of visitors visiting the
island
increased from one
million
to 3.5
million
.
In addition
to
this
, their accommodation preferences fluctuated from time to time.
To begin
with, the number of tourists soared from 2010 to 2017, though the figure remained the same for two
years
in 2015 and 2016 which was about 2.75
million
. For many
years
visitors preferred to stay on islands during their trip to the
island
and the figure increased from 750000 to 1.5
million
until 2017 and remained constant for the next two
years
.
However
, there was a dip in 2016 and
then
raised again by 2017 to 150000. When it comes to other people who stayed on cruise ships during their time on the
island
fluctuated for a few
years
but increased gradually from 250000 to 2
million
by 2017.
Submitted by tejanavyapc2000 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words island, years, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: