In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?
It is thought that in some countries, the roles of mothers are not like the roles of fathers. In
this
essay, the justifications of these will be illustrated in addition
to the role of them in the long run.
To begin
with, obviously, the physical as well as
physiological components of both father and mother are totally different. So to this
, the role of them is different. To illustrate this
, the emotional levels in females are higher than in males because of hormones. In order to this
reason , they are keen on feeding and keeping their children. Not only this
, but also
do a lot of housework as well. The other pattern can be seen in males, they are physically more robust than females. So, they can work as labourers, and soldiers and occupy some vital positions.According to
the aforementioned justifications, it is clear that
the fathers have the responsibility for the cost of living and the mothers play a major impact in housework and child feeding.
However
, despite these, currently, the role of both has changed. Take some modern countries as a clear example, mothers have occupied a high rank in some jobs , as in my country, the Ministry of Health is a woman. What is more, the Ministry of Defence in Spain is female. All of these were not available in the last
decades.Hence
,the jobs of both genders will be changed, dramatically in the future.
In a nutshell, the roles of guardians are not the same, but this
will be changed for the mentioned reasons.Submitted by nadeenelkenawy4425 on
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An essay needs a clear and logical structure, with an appropriate introduction and conclusion. Ensure that the introduction sets the stage for the discussion, and the conclusion summarizes the main points without introducing new ideas. Your essay does have an introduction and conclusion; however, the ideas could have been set out more clearly and logically. Work on smoothly transitioning between points and structuring paragraphs for stronger coherence.
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The essay marginally touched on the reasons why the roles of mothers and fathers are different, and attempts to predict future changes. However, the response was not fully developed with clear, comprehensive ideas. Elaborate further on these roles and provide a more detailed explanation of potential changes in the future. Additionally, include more relevant, specific examples to substantiate your points for a more persuasive essay.
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