The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
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The graphs indicate the statistics of revenue and expenditure of an American children's charity within a year, 2016.
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, it is explicit that most of their budget was gained via donating food and almost all of that was dedicated to program services.
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at the end
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of the year, they made a minor profit. Regarding the ways of boosting their budget, what stands out from the scheme is that
this
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institute was a private one and the government paid just 0.2% of their costs, as much as investment income;
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donating meals provided more than three-quarters of their wages.
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, 10.4 per cent of the whole was accounted for by community contributions. Eventually consisted of program
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and the other incomes 0.4% and 2.2% of the total respectively. Focusing on their prices, it can be seen that their deposits were a bit lower than their incomes, roughly 200,000.
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, approximately all of it was spent on program services, close to 96%. The vacant positions belonged to fundraising, management and general, 2.6% and 1.6%
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising events
  • expenditure
  • administration costs
  • program expenses
  • direct benefits
  • indirect benefits
  • underprivileged children
  • education
  • healthcare
  • shelter
  • nourishment
  • medical treatments
  • basic needs
  • financial sustainability
  • transparency
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