The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen an Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen an Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts compare citizens' ages in two different countries Yemen and Italy in three categories, 0-14
years
, 15-59
years
, and 60+
years
over 50
years
. In 2000 kids contributed half of the population in Yemen and after 50
years
the figures for people between 15-59
years
will increase. It was predicted that the proportion of the elderly in Italy will rise dramatically. In 2000, children between 0-14 were the largest part of Yemen, with 50% and
this
figure will decrease by almost a tenth. The number of adults Will go up from just less than two forth to a little under 60%. What stands out is that in
this
country senior citizens are the minority of the whole folks in the half of a century which will fall by merely 2%. In Italy, the
evident
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shows that people don't tend to breed as between 2000 and 2050 the percentage of youngsters will decline to about a tenth.
By contrast
,
this
country will see a dramatic rise around twice
of
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a quarter for
over
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those over
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60
years
old and,
consequently
, the rate of Individuals with 15-59 age will Drop to 46.2% from almost two-thirds.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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