The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The table shows percentages of the buyers of some products from five different countries in the 2002 period.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the table that just two countries got significantly surged in one item
while
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the others were decreased.
To begin
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with, in the first
position
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Turkey
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had increased data was 32,14% in Food, Drinks and Tobacco.
While
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the second
position
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was Ireland slightly fell in 28,91% from the same
position
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.
Furthermore
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, Italy, Spain, and Sweden got under 20% which means it was declined by the quantities of consumers.
On the other hand
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, Education gradually declined, the data shows 1,98% by Spain followed by Ireland was 2,21%.
However
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, Italy, Sweden, and
Turkey
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are in the same
position
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under the 5% ratio.
Whereas
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, for clothing or footwear the rate rose sharply had got by Italy at 9,00%.
Next,
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Ireland,
Turkey
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, and Spain were in the same
position
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at 6,00% number of consumption and
Turkey
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had dipped to 5,40% for buyers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words position, turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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