Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others claim that zoos has positive impact. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different opinions towards
zoos
'
existence
. Some may think that
zoos
are a good place for us to know more about
animals
.
However
, A lot of people think that
zoos
should be banned. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that we have to close all the
zoos
that exist
due to
the fact that in
zoos
,
animals
can lose their natural instinct slowly, and many
zoos
have bad maintenance which definitely will affect their animal collection.
Besides
that, numerous people think that
zoos
still have a positive impact. The
existence
of
zoos
is useful for children's educational purposes. Usually, in kindergarten and elementary school, they have a study tour program where one of the main choices is
zoos
. By visiting
zoos
, they can
know
Verb problem
learn
show examples
more about animal characteristics and their behaviour.
For instance
, a lion is a carnivore which means it will be dangerous if we come closer to them so we have to make a distance.
On the other hand
,
zoos
have negative impacts on the
animals
themselves. Their
existence
actually broke the rule of animal welfare.
Zoos
are not animal natural habitats. Like a tiger or elephant, they have to live in a jungle rather than in a cage which is smaller than nature. It can affect their instinct as an animal.
Furthermore
, there are so many cases related to the
zoos
' bad maintenance. The management prefers to pursue more profit
while
not taking care of their
animals
. In conclusion, the
existence
of
zoos
has benefits and costs. Comparing both sides, I think all
zoos
should be closed because we have to care more about
animals
, they are
also
like humans that have a right to live freely in their habitat. Nowadays, we can still learn about
animals
without visiting
zoos
, with the advancement of technology we can know more about them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • conservation efforts
  • endangered species
  • breeding programs
  • wildlife reserves
  • animal behavior
  • psychological stress
  • ethical considerations
  • captivity
  • moral questions
  • animal welfare
  • educational resources
  • community engagement
  • economic impact
  • revenue
  • sanctuaries
  • natural habitats
  • virtual reality
  • digital platforms
  • exploitation
  • neglect
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