The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categorries during 2015 and 2016.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of several
export
commodities in a country between 2015 and 2016. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
export
values in all categories increased in 2016 compared to 2015 except for gems and Use synonyms
jewellry
which declined slightly in 2016.
The petroleum products Correct your spelling
jewellery
export
amount went up approximately 2 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2016 to 63 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
after their Use synonyms
last
trade in 2015 which is 61 Linking Words
billion
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dollars
. The enginereed products transaction value started at 57 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2015, Use synonyms
then
, it surged to 62 Linking Words
billions
in 2016. The textile commodity trade amount Change to singular
billion
also
increased significantly in 2016 and reached 32 Linking Words
billion
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dollars
compared to its prior year value Use synonyms
that
marks only 25 Correct pronoun usage
which
billion
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dollars
. The agriculture products category increased a little bit around 1 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2016.
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On the other hand
, gems and jewellery commodity value in Linking Words
export
dropped from 43 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2015 to 41 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2016.Use synonyms
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