The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the stages of producing instant
noodles
in the company.
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Overall
, it is evident that the manufacturing Linking Words
noodles
process consists of eight stages beginning with bringing flour from storage silos and ending with labelling and sealing the Use synonyms
noodles
before selling them.
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Firstly
, flour stored in silos is brought to the mixer where it is incorporated into water and oil. Linking Words
Then
, the mixture is passed through rollers. These rollers shape the mixture and make it into dough sheets and Linking Words
finally
, these sheets are converted into dough strips. Linking Words
Next,
the dough strips are shaped into noodle discs and go through a cooking and drying phase. In Linking Words
this
stage, the Linking Words
noodles
are cooked with oil and Use synonyms
then
dried. These dried Linking Words
noodles
are now ready to be put into cups where vegetables and spices have been already added. At the final stage, the cups are labelled and sealed and Use synonyms
then
they are ready to be soldLinking Words
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