The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
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The line graph gives information about the
number
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of
shops
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categorized by closures and openings in one country from 2011 to 2018. The initial impression is that the
number
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of closed
shops
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and opened
shops
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fluctuated sharply during the same period. It is clearly seen from the chart that from 2011 to 2012 the
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of
shops
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which closed increased steadily by about 500. There was,
then
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, a peak at around 7,000 in 2013. After that, the
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of closed stores witnessed a significant decrease of almost 6,500 between 2013 to 2015.
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, a dip can be seen in the
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of closures at slightly 500,
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it recovered until 2016. During the
last
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2 years, the
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of closed
shops
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remained approximately unchanged.
According to
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the figure, the
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of opened
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fell to just under 4000 from 2011 to 2012. From 2012 up to 2014, it experienced a notable rise of nearly 6,000 and hit a peak before experiencing a decline of around 4,000 in 2015. The
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of openings plateaued at about 4,000 from 2015 to 2017. It,
next,
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went down until 2018.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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