The chart below gives information about computer ownership in the US from 1997 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about computer ownership in the US from 1997 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart reveals
computer
ownership
in the United States between 1997 and 2012, which are grouped into four categories (no
computer
,
one
computer
, two
computers
, and three or more
computers
).
Overall
, it is apparently seen that people without a
computer
had a downward trend,
while
a person who had
one
computer
experienced an upward trend.
In addition
, in the beginning, the
ownership
of no
computer
became the highest;
however
,
at the end
of the period, the
ownership
of
one
computer
was the highest. Looking at the chart in detail, in 1997, individuals without a
computer
started at just under 70%, followed by
one
computer
that begins at approximately a quarter. After that, the
ownership
of no
computer
moderately decreased from 2002 (stood at well above 50%) to 2012 (reached a lower percentage at a little less than 20%).
In contrast
, the
ownership
of
one
computer
was a notable rise from 2002 to the end of the period, which stood at just below 40% and a half, respectively.
Moreover
, owning two
computers
and three or more
computers
started at a small number (below a tenth).
Then
, both grew gradually for the following five periods and stood at around 30% combined.
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