The chart below gives information about computer ownership in the US from 1997 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about computer ownership in the US from 1997 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart reveals
computer
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ownership
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in the United States between 1997 and 2012, which are grouped into four categories (no
computer
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,
one
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computer
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, two
computers
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, and three or more
computers
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).
Overall
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, it is apparently seen that people without a
computer
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had a downward trend,
while
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a person who had
one
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computer
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experienced an upward trend.
In addition
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, in the beginning, the
ownership
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of no
computer
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became the highest;
however
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,
at the end
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of the period, the
ownership
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of
one
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computer
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was the highest. Looking at the chart in detail, in 1997, individuals without a
computer
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started at just under 70%, followed by
one
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computer
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that begins at approximately a quarter. After that, the
ownership
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of no
computer
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moderately decreased from 2002 (stood at well above 50%) to 2012 (reached a lower percentage at a little less than 20%).
In contrast
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, the
ownership
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of
one
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computer
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was a notable rise from 2002 to the end of the period, which stood at just below 40% and a half, respectively.
Moreover
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, owning two
computers
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and three or more
computers
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started at a small number (below a tenth).
Then
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, both grew gradually for the following five periods and stood at around 30% combined.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership, one, computers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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