The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph shows the
percentage
of total sales of three different music
formats, that is
by streams
, downloads
, and purchased CDs
, between 2011 and 2018. Overall
, the total percentage
varies between nearly 10% and nearly 60%.
In 2011, CDs
were the most purchased music
formats
when it is up Fix the agreement mistake
format
to
60%, followed by Change preposition
apply
music
downloads
at nearly 40%, and the lowest percentage
was by streams
where
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it
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apply
only
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was only
near
10%. The Change the word
nearly
percentage
of music
streams
increased gradually until it peaked at 40% in 2018. There was a steady increase on
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in
music
downloads
until 2014 when it reached its peak at 40%, and decreased until 2018 when it plunged to 30%. On the other side, the trend of purchased CDs
was not the same with
the others where it decreased from nearly 60% in 2011 to only 30% in 2018.
It can be concluded that the number of Change preposition
as
music
downloads
and streams
rose steadily from the time being, while
the number of CDs
purchased dropped steadily in the same period of time.Submitted by writingielts0 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, music, streams, downloads, cds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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