You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Mr. Patel, I am writing you

this

letter to invite regards a

party

that I am going to plan next weekend. I would like to introduce myself I am Rutik from Jaypur and just moved to your next house yesterday and throwing a

party

to make friends meanwhile so we can build a great friendship. I would like to describe a

party

function so you could be well prepared for the day.

Firstly

, I arranged a bar setup and appetizer for the startup meal and meanwhile, my wife will prepare dinner. For children, I have arranged a playground kit for their entertainment purposes in my backyard.

Lastly

, I rented a DJ system for the day so everyone could dance with joy.

However

, it would be noisier for all the neighbours so I came to decide if we invite all of them

then

there would be no noise disturbance for you and in the same way, we can build our relationship stronger. Please do accept my invitation to my

party

. Yours sincerely, Rutik Sharma

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

174 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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