Your neighbour has animals and they cause noise. Write a letter - Describe the situation - Suggestion to solve the problem - Tell him what will you do if he will not solve the problem
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Tajinder Singh living in one of the apartments in your building. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the noise caused by your dogs.
To commence with, I am a student in the master's program at York University. So, I always have to deal with a number of assignments and projects regularly, whenever, I come back home after my classes. However
, I am unable to concentrate on my studies at that time due to
your pets barking. Moreover
, my performance in the previous examination was affected as well because of this
issue.
Last
week, I also
talked to your wife about this
problem, when I was going to attend my lectures in the morning; but the situation is still the same. I would like to suggest that you should train your domestic animals with the help of an expert trainer or try to keep your windows closed. Please give this
matter your immediate attention. Otherwise
, I will have to file a complaint to the society office or local council to resolve it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Tajinder SinghSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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