You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter: -Complain about the situation -Say why this is a problem -And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Mr John, I am writing to bring to your attention a pressing issue that has been causing significant discomfort to the residents of the University residence.

Although

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I am delighted that we have

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facility that offers tremendous benefits to students, the restaurant remains open up to midnight, and result, there is

noise

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pollution, shouting and the loud

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apply

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musics

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music

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continuing until 12:30 P.M each night.

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couses

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caused

me and the students who live with me in the residence a serious emergency because at that time we

are

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either trying to study or complete a project or to sleep. The

noise

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is so strong that we can neither study nor sleep

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being

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sound.

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unpleasant

noise

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does not allow us to have a good relax, which has a negative effect on our knowledge. I will be bound you understand that

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worrying

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a worrying

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situation for all of us. To avoid

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problem, I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the restaurant opening hours from 10:00 am to 10:00 pm. I demand the management to strictly control

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noise

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. I hope you will resolve these complaints of mine soon. Yours sincerely, Emma Uatson.

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task achievement

Try to correct spelling and grammatical errors for better clarity (e.g., 'emergency' should be 'problem', 'due to it is sound' should be 'due to its sound')

coherence cohesion

Provide clearer paragraph transitions to enhance the logical flow of the letter.

task achievement

The letter covers all required points: the complaint, why it is a problem, and a solution.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal for the context.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph conveys a single idea, making it easier to understand the writer's message.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

199 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

noise pollution
residence
incessant
disrupt
sleep pattern
well-being
academic performance
soundproofing
noise-canceling barriers
double-glazed windows
mitigate
operational hours
closure time
protocol
monitoring
conducive
swift resolution
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