Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
Plastic
products are hazardous to our ecosystem. This
essay
will discuss the main causes of plastic
-related challenges including unfertile land and global warming. This
essay
will also
suggest solutions to these problems including introducing introducing alternatives and laws by the government for the public.
Global warming is associated with the excessive use of plastic
. In addition
, it decreases the fertility of the land. On the one hand, If it is burned, it emits greenhouse gases and
increases Correct word choice
apply
earth's
temperature and harms nature . Correct article usage
the earth's
On the other hand
, If plastic
is dumped, it contaminates with soil and blocks the
nutrient penetration. Correct article usage
apply
For Instance
, the ozone layer blocks cosmic rays from penetrating into the earth's atmosphere due to
the increase in temperature a hole has been found in the North Pole. Moreover
, due to
the excessive use of plastic
, five per cent of agricultural land in Pakistan became barren. Hence
, use of the plastic
has repercussions on our environment.
A possible solution to this
problem would be the mass production of paper
-based packaging by the government through industries so that the community can access and adopt it. One immediate practical solution is to ascertain the strict laws, so people can be set accountable in the court of law. For example
, people have been found to opt for paper
packaging overwhelmingly across the globe due to
awareness campaigns and their availability. In addition
, after retail stores were fined in Pakistan for selling products in plastic
packaging, everybody considered paper
packaging as a vital option. Therefore
, in light of the aforementioned solutions, we can sustain our environment.
In conclusion, this
essay
discussed that plastic
has degraded soil and increased global warming. This
essay
suggested solutions to provide paper
packaging and implement laws so that people take paper
packaging into consideration.Submitted by Haris Khan on
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