The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The charts provide information about the percentage of
family
who Fix the agreement mistake
families
has
3 types of electrical appliances (washing Correct subject-verb agreement
have
machine
, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner) and the Use synonyms
time
people Use synonyms
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
on
doing chores in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it was clear that over Linking Words
time
, the amount of electrical appliances that Use synonyms
was
used Change the verb form
were
increase
over Wrong verb form
increased
time
and there was a fall in the Use synonyms
time
each family spent on doing housework.
In 1920, the number of households that had washing Use synonyms
Use synonyms
machine
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
was similar, about 40% and 30%, respectively. Washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
grew to 60% in 1960, Use synonyms
then
there was a slight fluctuation before it reached a peak of around 73% in 2019. The percentage of using households Linking Words
used
vacuum Correct pronoun usage
that used
cleaner
rose significantly, surpassing washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Use synonyms
machine
in 1960 (60%) from 1920 to 2000 (30% to 100%) Fix the agreement mistake
machines
then
Linking Words
remain
stable at 100% from 2000 to 2019. Wrong verb form
remained
Refrigerator
saw a Fix the agreement mistake
Refrigerators
dramtic
increase of 100% in 40 years, Correct your spelling
dramatic
then
stayed stable to 2019.
The trend for the Linking Words
numbers
of households that did their chores was downward. Started with 50 hours per week, per family in 1920, Fix the agreement mistake
number
it
dropped down considerably to around 15 hours. The number was unchanged from 1920 to 2000 before reached it Correct word choice
and it
lowest
point in 2019 (10 hours).Correct pronoun usage
its lowest
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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